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Query Letter Critique or Synopsis Critique – $15 each or bundle for $25
Includes an annotated document that highlights development/structure, search for strong hook, my comments/feedback/thoughts for revisions. This also includes a revision once my edits are made as well as answering any possibly querying questions you may have.
Opening Pages – 1st Chapter or First 15 pages – $20
A look into the telling of your story, flow, development, pacing, engagement, world building (if any). I will use track changes to mark up your document and provide my thoughts/feedback while reading. I will also search for any grammatical errors that need adjustment or any lines that read awkwardly (hence flow mentioned above)
Longer Services on a Case-By-Case Basis
A further look into your book providing the same feedback as stated before. I will look at your book from the readers aspect while also searching for any grammatical errors that need adjustment or awkward reading lines. I won’t have any prices listed for this as I am unsure how many I can currently take on so please feel free to message me through the site.
All payments are to be made through PayPal.
Amanda is represented by Analieze Cervantes and Jennifer Herrington of the Harvey Klinger Literary Agency. Amanda queried her first finished manuscript Sever My Soul for about 4 months and her second manuscript Vampires Are the Worst, which she wrote in one week, for less than a month ultimately leading to her offers of representation. During the querying process for her first manuscript she received 2 full requests and one partial request and for her second manuscript she sent out only ten queries and received five full requests with 2 offers of representation. Aside from working her way through the querying trenches herself, Amanda is also a literary intern with Art + Deco Literary Agency where she has been exposed to the importance and guidelines of what goes into the perfect query letter. Finally, Amanda has also signed on to be a mentor for Writer Mentor’s summer program!